One night I walked out into the full moon light
and beheld quite a sight
A women of unbelievable beauty
It was that of a deity
As she walked her beauty emitted such a light
That illuminated all the night
Her body is that of a greek goddess
Adorned in a most beautiful dress
Sky blue it is colored
Maybe from the heavens she was fathered
And as I stared into her hypnotically beautiful eyes
My heart flies
Higher than ever before
did it sore
As she walks closer, Im curious what she'll say
Maybe I've been blessed today
Feelings of love coarse through my body
I try to remain steady
She stops right before me
I can still hardly believe what i see
She opens her lovely lips and says to me,
"Mine will you forever be?"
And i reply,
Until we die
-Garrick M Robertson 9/23/07
wow nice writing!
Aww. It's lovely!
this is...so amazing!! so well written!!! I love it!!!
Thanks alot, i tried hard to make it good!
wow beauitful nice work
This is quite good. You put much emphasis on the aura of beauty that she emits. Nice work.
first comment! great job, awesome poem