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One night I walked out into the full moon light
and beheld quite a sight

A women of unbelievable beauty
It was that of a deity

As she walked her beauty emitted such a light
That illuminated all the night

Her body is that of a greek goddess
Adorned in a most beautiful dress

Sky blue it is colored
Maybe from the heavens she was fathered

And as I stared into her hypnotically beautiful eyes
My heart flies

Higher than ever before
did it sore

As she walks closer, Im curious what she'll say
Maybe I've been blessed today

Feelings of love coarse through my body
I try to remain steady

She stops right before me
I can still hardly believe what i see

She opens her lovely lips and says to me,
"Mine will you forever be?"

And i reply,
Until we die

-Garrick M Robertson 9/23/07
This is a poem i wrote for :iconcrimsonwolfxiii: and its based on a pic i also drew for her which will be coming out on DA this friday!! Hope you like it!

(and if its not the write type of poetry i didnt know what the name for a rhyming poem with a aa bb cc pattern is called so i guessed fixed.)

This poem is all mine
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RC-man-Design Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2011  Student Interface Designer
wow nice writing! :)
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AmandaLyn11 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008
Aww. It's lovely!
<3
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superiorxemnasi Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008
ty^^
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AmandaLyn11 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2008
You're welcome! :D
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CrimsonWolfXIII Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Student General Artist
this is...so amazing!! so well written!!! I love it!!!
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superiorxemnasi Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
I wrote it for you, i hoped you'd like it and you did so my job is done
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CrimsonWolfXIII Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007  Student General Artist
^^ :D :)
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superiorxemnasi Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
Thanks alot, i tried hard to make it good!
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lordofflowers Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
wow beauitful nice work
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Linestar777 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2007
This is quite good. You put much emphasis on the aura of beauty that she emits. Nice work. :thumbsup:
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