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Wanders in darkness
His heart a black hole

When he sees a light
Faint, but very well known

It's her, but why here
This place of his pain

His sweet memories
Are not allowed here

She comes right to him
And begins to talk

It's her, in pain too
Looking for him here

Lost, broken as him
She regrets it all

Forgiveness she asks
He holds her near him

Tells her, course he shall
For he loves her so

Light breaks through on them
Darkness is now gone

Together once more
Two halves again whole

-Garrick M. Robertson 11/5/07
A response to Lost my earlier poem. Hope :iconcrimsonwolfxiii: likes this one better

My friend:iconlordoffireviii: helped me a little bit on this
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very nice! glad to help ^-^
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InuYashaDiva15 Nov 5, 2007  Student General Artist
aww thats so cute...:tears:...that is so good :clap:
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:iconsuperiorxemnasi:
Thank you very much
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LadyFromEast Nov 5, 2007  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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:iconsuperiorxemnasi:
:bow: thank you thank you!
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